The opinion
IN THE UNITED STATES DISTRICT COURT
FOR THE MIDDLE DISTRICT OF ALABAMA
EASTERN DIVISION
CONNIE MICHELLE GRAY, next )
friend and personal representative of )
Alex Joseph Gray, deceased, )
)
Plaintiff, )
)
v. ) CASE NO. 3:24-cv-384-ECM
) [WO]
JIMMY ABBETT, et al., )
)
Defendants. )
MEMORANDUM OPINION and ORDER
This case arises out of the death of Alex Gray. Plaintiff, Connie Michelle Gray, is
Alex Gray’s mother and the personal representative of his estate. She asserts state and
federal claims against Tallapoosa County Sheriff Jimmy Abbett, Tallapoosa County Jail
Administrator Al Wilson, Tallapoosa County itself, Geni Abernathy (a nurse employed at
the Tallapoosa County Sheriff’s Department), and Correction Officers A, B, and C. (Doc.
60). The named Defendants move to dismiss all of Plaintiff’s claims. (Docs. 61, 64).
Plaintiff opposes those motions. (Docs. 70, 71). Upon consideration, the motions are due
to be granted in part and denied in part.
I. BACKGROUND
According to the second amended complaint, Alex Gray was arrested in April 2022
for various “drug related” offenses and was being detained in the Tallapoosa County
Detention Center. (Doc. 60 at 8, para. 12). On May 28, 2022, while Gray was still in the
jail’s custody, Myles Carter Mitchell Kellum was also taken into the jail’s custody and
placed in Gray’s cell. (Id. at 9, paras. 14–15). Kellum had managed to pass through the
jail’s security with fentanyl, allegedly “because he was not searched or strip searched.” (Id.
at 9, para. 15). Kellum offered Gray some of this fentanyl, which Gray accepted and
ingested. (Id.). Gray became “unresponsive” and was ultimately taken to a hospital, though
Plaintiff alleges that Gray’s condition went unnoticed for several hours because corrections
officers were not conducting routine checks, in violation of the jail’s protocol. (See id. at
9–15, paras. 15–29). Despite the hospital’s treatment, Gray passed away. (Id. at 16–17,
para. 35).
Plaintiff initiated this lawsuit in state court on May 28, 2024, naming as defendants
Abbett, Kellum, Tallapoosa County, and fictitious parties “A–Z.” (See doc. 1-1). Abbett
subsequently removed the case to this Court. (See doc. 1). On September 5, 2024, Plaintiff
voluntarily amended her complaint, adding Wilson, Abernathy, and Correction Officers A,
B, and C as Defendants. (See doc. 16). On Defendants’ motions, (see doc. 22 at 4–9; doc.
33 at 4–8), the Court struck the amended complaint as an impermissible shotgun pleading,
(doc. 59). In that order, the Court explained that the amended complaint constituted a
shotgun pleading for three reasons. First, each count adopted all of the allegations of the
preceding counts. (Id. at 5). Second, the amended complaint asserted multiple claims
against multiple Defendants without properly distinguishing between them such that
Defendants did not have fair notice of the specific claims brought against them. (Id. at 5–
6). Finally, the amended complaint “list[ed] two Count [Two]’s and two Count [Five]’s,”
which added to the confusion caused by the pleading. (Id. at 6–7). Accordingly, the Court
struck the amended complaint with instructions for repleading. (Id. at 8).
Plaintiff timely amended. (See doc. 60). The second amended complaint, which
cures some of the foregoing deficiencies, asserts six claims: medical negligence/wanton
conduct against Abernathy (Count One), failure to provide necessary medical attention
against Tallapoosa County and Abernathy (Count Two), a violation of the Fourteenth
Amendment against Abbett and Wilson (Count Three), wrongful death against all
Defendants (Count Four), violations of the Eighth and Fourteenth Amendments against
“Defendant Correctional Officers” and Abernathy (Count Five), and a deliberate
indifference claim against Abbett and Wilson (Count Six). (Id. at 20–40, paras. 45–89).
Defendants move to dismiss, (docs. 61, 64), arguing, among other things, that the second
amended complaint remains a shotgun pleading, (see docs. 62, 65, 72, 73). Plaintiff
opposes those motions. (Docs. 70, 71).
II. JURISDICTION AND VENUE
The Court has original subject matter jurisdiction over Plaintiff’s federal claims
under 28 U.S.C. §§ 1331 and 1343, and supplemental jurisdiction over Plaintiff’s state
claims under 28 U.S.C. § 1367. Personal jurisdiction and venue are uncontested, and the
Court concludes that venue properly lies in the Middle District of Alabama. See 28 U.S.C.
§ 1391.
III. DISCUSSION
The Court first explains why the claims against Correction Officers A, B, and C are
due to be dismissed. The Court then addresses Defendants’ argument that Plaintiff’s claims
are due to be dismissed with prejudice because the second amended complaint remains an
impermissible shotgun pleading. The Court agrees that the second amended complaint is
a shotgun pleading but ultimately determines that dismissal on this basis is without
prejudice and grants Plaintiff another opportunity to properly plead her claims. Because
Plaintiff will be given leave to amend, Defendants’ motions to dismiss are otherwise denied
without prejudice with leave to refile.
A. Correction Officers A, B, and C
The general rule is that “fictitious-party pleading is not permitted in federal court.”
Richardson v. Johnson, 598 F.3d 734, 738 (11th Cir. 2010). There’s an exception to this
general rule where the use of a fictitious “label is, ‘at the very worst, surplusage,’ because
the plaintiff’s description of the defendant is ‘sufficiently clear to allow service of
process.’” Vielma v. Gruler, 808 F. App’x 872, 880 (11th Cir. 2020) (quoting Dean v.
Barber, 951 F.2d 1210, 1215–16 & n.6 (11th Cir. 1992)); see also id. (“[O]ur precedent
has always required an unambiguous description of a defendant that enables service of
process.”). Plaintiff argues that her descriptions of the Correction Officer-Defendants are
sufficient to bring them within this “narrow,” Kabbaj v. John Does 1–10, 600 F. App’x
638, 641 (11th Cir. 2015), “limited,” Smith v. Comcast Corp., 786 F. App’x 935, 940 (11th
Cir. 2019), exception. (Doc. 70 at 30–32; doc. 71 at 27–29). She is mistaken.
Plaintiff describes officer “A” as an officer “who would have been in charge of
searching inmates and the intake process of inmates.” (Doc. 60 at 6, para. 6). Officer “B”
was an officer “who would have been in charge of checking the medical holding cell,
making the decision to move Alex Gray[,] and monitoring that jail cell in minute blocks.”
(Id. at 7, para. 7). And officer “C” supervised the other two. (Id. at 7, para. 8 (“Correction
officer ‘C’ . . . would have supervised the correction[] officers described as ‘A’ and/or ‘B’
and also had knowledge of the medical issues surrounding Alex Gray and the intake of
Myles Kellum.”)). But it’s not clear from these allegations that Plaintiff even knows for
certain that officers A, B, and C exist, rather than simply presumes that officers fitting these
descriptions likely exist. See Perkins v. Crook, 2026 WL 360773, at *1–2, 4 (M.D. Ala.
2026) (striking claims against fictitious parties identified as, for example, “the correctional
officer assigned to monitor and provide security for the dorm the [p]laintiff was housed in
at the time of inmate Carter’s assault on the [p]laintiff” and “the cube officer assigned to
monitor the dorm the [p]lainitff was housed in when inmate Carter assaulted the
[p]laintiff”). Such scant detail falls short of the “surplusage” standard. Compare Dean,
951 F.2d at 1215–16 & n.6 (determining that the pro se plaintiff’s describing a fictitious
defendant as the “Chief Deputy of the Jefferson County Jail John Doe” was sufficient
because it would permit “service of process on the ‘Chief’”), with Richardson, 598 F.3d at
738 (identification of defendant as “John Doe (Unknown Legal Name), Guard, Charlotte
Correctional Institute” fell outside of Dean’s “limited exception” because it “was
insufficient to identify the defendant among the many guards employed at [the Charlotte
Correctional Institute]”), and Vielma, 808 F. App’x at 880 (affirming dismissal of claims
against various John Doe defendants with descriptions ranging “from the highly generic
(e.g., ‘a male detective,’ ‘one of the officers at the hospital,’ or ‘an FBI Agent’) to the ever-
so-slightly less generic (e.g., ‘[a] female white officer about 5 feet 10–11 inches in height’
or ‘a middle-aged white male [officer]’)” (alterations in original)), and Smith, 786 F. App’x
at 940 (the plaintiff’s descriptions of fictitious defendants were too vague where he merely
“identifie[d] them as area supervisors” with “widely[ ]shared characteristics” because these
descriptions did “not necessarily pick out one Comcast employee”).
The claims against Correction Officers A, B, and C are therefore due to be
dismissed.
B. Shotgun Pleading
A shotgun pleading is a complaint that fails to conform to the Federal Rules of Civil
Procedure’s pleading requirements. Weiland v. Palm Beach Cnty. Sheriff’s Off., 792 F.3d
1313, 1320 (11th Cir. 2015). The “unifying characteristic of all types of shotgun pleadings
is that they fail to one degree or another . . . to give the defendants adequate notice of the
claims against them and the grounds upon which each claim rests.” Id. at 1323. “[A]
district court that receives a shotgun pleading should strike it and instruct counsel to replead
the case.” Est. of Bass v. Regions Bank, Inc., 947 F.3d 1352, 1358 (11th Cir. 2020). “When
a litigant files a shotgun pleading, is represented by counsel, and fails to request leave to
amend, a district court must sua sponte give him one chance to replead before dismissing
his case with prejudice on non-merits shotgun pleadings grounds.” Barmapov v. Amuial,
986 F.3d 1321, 1326 (11th Cir. 2021) (quoting Vibe Micro, Inc. v. Shabanets, 878 F.3d
1291, 1296 (11th Cir. 2018)).
Defendants submit that Plaintiff’s second amended complaint—just like her last
one—is due to be stricken as a shotgun pleading. (Doc. 62 at 3–5; doc. 65 at 3–6). The
thrust of their argument is that the operative pleading continues to lump Defendants and
causes of action without properly distinguishing between them. (Doc. 62 at 3 (“[The second
amended complaint] continues to recycle the same generalized allegations across multiple
counts and lump[s] all [D]efendants together without distinction.”); doc. 65 at 6 (“In sum,
the [s]econd [a]mended [c]omplaint remains a quintessential shotgun pleading because it
does not ‘give the defendants adequate notice of the claims against them and the grounds
upon which each claim rests.’” (quoting Weiland, 792 F.3d at 1323)). These arguments
are well taken.
Count One raises a “medical negligence/wanton conduct” claim against Abernathy.
(Doc. 60 at 20–25, paras. 45–50). In that Count, Plaintiff alleges that Abernathy owed
Alex Gray twenty-four distinct duties.1 (Id. at 20–22, para. 48). These included many
seemingly identical duties, including the duties to “properly assess Alex Gray’s needs,”
“assess and observe Alex Gray,” “timely and properly assess Alex Gray and follow-up on
the assessment to ensure that Alex Gray is receiving timely and adequate treatment to meet
his medical needs,” and “properly and timely assess Alex Gray.” (Id.; see doc. 65 at 5
(“These allegations are substantively identical, yet Plaintiff’s decision to bifurcate them
leaves [Abernathy] unsure whether Plaintiff intends to assert distinguishable causes of
action against her.”)); Cramer v. Florida, 117 F.3d 1258, 1261 (11th Cir. 1997) (discerning
a shotgun pleading where the complaint was “so disorganized and ambiguous that it [wa]s
almost impossible to discern precisely what . . . the[] appellants were claiming”). Plaintiff
1 Plaintiff alleges Abernathy breached these duties in twenty-five different ways. (See doc. 60 at 22–24,
para. 49). Though Plaintiff touts this as a virtue, (doc. 71 at 8 (“[E]ven a cursory review of the [s]econd
[a]mended [c]omplaint establishes that each count contains factual allegations specific to the count, and
even more than the [f]irst [a]mended [c]omplaint. For example, Count [One] . . . contains twenty-five
allegations of failures in the care provided by Defendant nurse Abernathy . . . .” (emphasis in original))), it
actually presents an additional shotgun pleading issue, see Garcia v. Carnival Corp., 838 F. Supp. 2d 1334,
1337 (S.D. Fla. 2012) (“Count I of Garcia’s Complaint epitomizes a form of ‘shotgun’ pleading. Garcia
begins Count I by alleging that Defendant owed a duty to Garcia . . . . Garcia then proceeds to allege at
least twenty-one ways in which Defendant breached this duty.” (internal citation omitted)).
also lists duties seemingly unrelated to Count One, including to “provide employees, staff,
and/or medical professionals trained in the proper manner to care for and treat patients”
and “employ personnel, staff[,] and/or medical professionals who understand proper
procedures to be followed when attempting to give care and assistance to a resident.” (See
doc. 60 at 21–24, paras. 48–49). These latter allegations would appear related to a
negligent hiring, training, or supervision claim—discrete causes of action with distinct
elements and theories of liability. See Weiland, 792 F.3d at 1322–23 (“The third type of
shotgun pleading is one that commits the sin of not separating into a different count each
cause of action or claim for relief.”).
Count Two, a claim against Abernathy and Tallapoosa County for “failure to
provide necessary medical attention,” is confusing for at least two reasons. (Doc. 60 at 25–
27, paras. 51–55). First, the claims against Abernathy appear entirely duplicative of the
allegations against her in Count One. (See id. at 26, para. 55 (alleging that Abernathy
“fail[ed] to provide timely and correct medical care and attention to Alex
Gray . . . demonstrating negligence and/or wantonness”)). Second, though Count Two
does not assert a cause of action against Abbett, it includes an allegation that he “waited
until Gray was beyond the point of where his health could improve with medical treatment
to have him released,” appearing to reference a standalone deliberate indifference claim
against him.2 (Id. at 26, para. 54). Both issues indicate that the second amended complaint
2 Similarly, though Count Three only names Abbett and Wilson, it includes an allegation that “[a]ll
Defendants were active participants in creating the[ alleged] policies, practices[,] and customs and had
knowledge that drug smuggling and ingestion was a widespread occurrence in the Tallapoosa County jail.”
(Doc. 60 at 28, para. 59). Accordingly, it is not clear which Defendants are implicated in Count Three,
either.
is a shotgun pleading. See Butero v. Royal Maccabees Life Ins. Co., 174 F.3d 1207, 1211
(11th Cir. 1999) (explaining that a complaint was a shotgun pleading because, among other
defects, it “include[d] three counts alleging fraud that are apparently duplicative”); Lowe
v. Delta Air Lines, Inc., 730 F. App’x 724, 729 (11th Cir. 2018) (per curiam) (styling a
complaint a shotgun pleading that included “duplicative and overlapping” claims).
Counts Three and Six present additional issues. The claims asserted in these Counts
seem identical, as both assert deliberate indifference claims against Abbett and Wilson.
(Compare doc. 60 at 27–30, paras. 56–63, with id. at 37–40, paras. 81–89). Employing
some guess work, Plaintiff seems to be asserting an official capacity claim in Count Three
(i.e., a claim against Tallapoosa County itself), because Count Six asserts a claim against
Abbett and Wilson “in their individual capacit[ies].” (Doc. 60 at 37). This theory is also
supported by the fact that Count Three claims Alex Gray died as a result of “an
unconstitutional policy, practice, and/or custom,” (id. at 27, para. 56)—but then again, so
does Count Six, (id. at 37, para. 81). See McDowell v. Brown, 392 F.3d 1283, 1289 (11th
Cir. 2004) (“[T]o impose [42 U.S.C.] § 1983 liability on a municipality, a plaintiff must
show[] . . . that the municipality had a custom or policy that constituted deliberate
indifference to [a] constitutional right . . . .”). In any event, the Court should not have to
guess what claims Plaintiff is trying to assert, nor should Defendants have to speculate as
to what claims they must respond. See Weiland, 792 F.3d at 1323; accord Sledge v.
Goodyear Dunlop Tires N.A., Ltd., 275 F.3d 1014, 1018 n.8 (11th Cir. 2001) (per curiam)
(“The failure of the plaintiff to identify his claims with sufficient clarity to enable the
defendant to frame a responsi[v]e pleading constitutes shotgun pleading.”).
Plaintiff’s second amended complaint also continues to lump Defendants together
such that it is, at times, impossible to tell which Defendants are accused of what conduct.
Plaintiff repeatedly refers to “Defendants” without distinguishing between them. (See, e.g.,
doc. 60 at 11, para. 21 (“Defendants did not administer naloxone at the Tallapoosa County
Jail on May 28, 2022[,] to Alex Gray.”); id. at 14, para. 28 (“Defendants failed to properly
search Kellum prior to allowing him in the presence of Gray by failing to carry out their
duties to search new inmates.”); id. at 15, para. 29 (“Video later surfaced and showed that
Alex ingested fentanyl, which should have been caught during observation or monitoring
by the Defendants.”)). For instance, Count Four alleges that “Defendants each failed to act
in a timely and proper manner to provide accurate and truthful information to medical
personnel which would have saved Alex’s life.” (Doc. 60 at 31, para. 68). But that
allegation could not plausibly be meant to apply to Tallapoosa County. Likewise, both
Counts Four and Five contain lengthy paragraphs that, contrary to Plaintiff’s contentions,
do indeed lump Defendants together, leaving Defendants (and the Court) to guess which
allegations apply to which Defendants. Here’s an illustrative example:
Moreover, these Defendants acted in concert or individually,
either directly or indirectly by actions of their agent, by (i)
failing to properly search Kellum; (ii) placing Kellum in the
same jail cell as Gray; (iii) failing to timely review, observe or
check in on Gray on or about May 28, 2022 (the Saturday of
the Memorial Day weekend 2022), especially after the fentanyl
was ingested; (iv) failing to administer naloxone by any of the
Defendants for the safety and revival of Gray; (v) failing to
train Tallapoosa Jail staff in the safe, timely and effective
administration of naloxone; (vi) failing to timely transfer Gray
directly to a trauma center after Gray had ingested Fentanyl;
(vii) failing to notify EMS personnel or hospital staff, at all or
in a timely manner, of what happened to Gray, so that hospital
staff could timely address his needs, since this was a clear
medical emergency and time was of the essence; (viii) further,
instead of providing true facts of what happened to Gray (e.g.,
presenting false evidence), Defendants Abbett, Wilson,
Tallapoosa County, Abernathy and the Correctional officers A,
B, and C created an alternative story concerning an
independent heart attack, with unknown cause and source,
being the cause of Gray’s medical distress at the time; (ix)
failing to appropriately and sufficiently staff the Tallapoosa
Jail on May 28, 2022 with competent staff for the safety of
Gray and/or timely and properly meet his medical needs.
(Id. at 31–32, para. 69; see id. at 35–36, para. 80 (doing the same thing in Count Five)).
But surely Plaintiff is not alleging that a nurse failed to properly search an inmate, that a
county sheriff should have personally administered naloxone to Alex Gray, or that the
unnamed Correction Officers are to blame for the allegedly inadequate staffing of the jail.3
Despite these many faults, Plaintiff argues that the second amended complaint
contains sufficient detail regarding “the events as they unfolded concerning Alex Gray at
the Tallapoosa County Jail.” (Doc. 71 at 3; accord doc. 70 at 4 (“[E]ven a cursory review
of the [second amended c]omplaint establishes that each count contains factual allegations
specific to the count.”)). That misses the point. The second amended complaint is not a
shotgun pleading because it says too little. It’s a shotgun pleading because it says too much
without specifying which allegations relate to which claims, and which claims are asserted
against which Defendants.
3 The Court also notes that Plaintiff’s phrasing, even where specific, occasionally invites confusion as to
whom an allegation relates. (See, e.g., doc. 60 at 35, para. 79 (“The Defendants Abernathy, . . . took no
action to address such serious medical needs . . . .” (emphasis added)); id. at 36, para. 81 (alleging deliberate
indifference on the part of “these Defendants” after a string of allegations that appear to relate to all
Defendants in some places and specific Defendants in others)).
Because the Court has already stricken one complaint as a shotgun pleading,
Defendants ask the Court to dismiss Plaintiff’s claims with prejudice this time around.
(Doc. 62 at 5; doc. 65 at 6). The Court has the authority to do so. See Barmapov, 986 F.3d
at 1326 (“Here, Barmapov was represented by counsel, the district court dismissed his first
amended complaint after explaining why it was a shotgun pleading, and the court gave him
a chance to try again. Barmapov squandered that opportunity by filing another shotgun
pleading. Under this circumstance, we have no doubt that the district court did not abuse
its discretion.”). All the same, a comparison of the amended complaint with the second
amended complaint reveals that Plaintiff did attempt to cure the deficiencies identified in
the Court’s previous order. For example, she no longer incorporates by reference all
preceding allegations in each count. Accordingly, the Court will grant Plaintiff the
opportunity to amend. See Foman v. Davis, 371 U.S. 178, 182 (1962) (“If the underlying
facts or circumstances relied upon by a plaintiff may be a proper subject of relief, he ought
to be afforded an opportunity to test his claim on the merits.”). But Plaintiff is expressly
warned that a third failure to properly plead her claims may result in dismissal with
prejudice. See id. (stating that leave to amend need not be given in the face of “repeated
failure to cure deficiencies by amendments previously allowed”).4
4 The deficiencies identified in this Order are not intended to constitute a definitive laundry list of every
single pleading problem presented by the second amended complaint. As the list the Court has provided
should make clear, the second amended complaint suffers from a number of defects, and the Court has
attempted to provide as much guidance as possible while also recognizing that the shotgun pleading doctrine
is intended in part to conserve scarce judicial resources. See Vibe Micro, 878 F.3d at 1295. The Court is
under no obligation to craft a compliant complaint for Plaintiff—much the same way that courts cannot
parse defective complaints “in search of a potentially valid claim,” as that “would give the appearance of
lawyering for one side of the controversy.” Jackson v. Bank of Am., N.A., 898 F.3d 1348, 1355 n.6 (11th
Cir. 2018). So while districts courts “should explain how [an] offending pleading violates the shotgun
IV. CONCLUSION
Accordingly, for the reasons stated, and for good cause, it is
ORDERED as follows:
1. Defendants’ motions to dismiss (docs. 61, 64) are GRANTED in part and
DENIED in part.
a. Plaintiff’s second amended complaint (doc. 60) is STRICKEN as an
impermissible shotgun pleading.
b. The claims against Correction Officers A, B, and C are DISMISSED.
c. The motions to dismiss are otherwise DENIED without prejudice,
with leave to refile at a later stage as appropriate.
2. On or before July 8, 2026, Plaintiff shall file a third amended complaint that
complies with Federal Rules of Civil Procedure 8 and 10 and with all of the directives
contained in this Order. Failure to do so may result in the dismissal of Plaintiff’s claims
with prejudice.
DONE this 24th day of June, 2026.
/s/ Emily C. Marks
EMILY C. MARKS
UNITED STATES DISTRICT JUDGE
pleading rule so that the party may properly avoid future shotgun pleadings,” Vibe Micro, 878 F.3d at 1296,
the Court has discharged that duty. In addition to complying with all the directives included in this Order,
Plaintiff’s counsel are advised to carefully consider the ample shotgun pleading jurisprudence in this circuit
before submitting a third amended complaint. Cf. Barmapov, 986 F.3d at 1326–32 (Tjoflat, J., concurring)
(writing separately to provide direction as to shotgun pleadings “to guide lawyers in this Circuit through
the pleadings stage”).